> Any suggestions for my story plot?

Any suggestions for my story plot?

Posted at: 2014-06-09 
I plan to make these a pg-13 manga Menma Kirishima is a middle school delinquent (he's a seer-someone who demonstrate highly developed mental abilities)who have been sent to the principal office for the 20th time. The principal gives menma 2 opinions: be expelled or join the safety patrol(school equalinent of the police). Menma chose the partrol. Patrol charges are common stuff you see at any other school Ex -sleeping in class - 1 hr. Detention -stealing lunch money- 2-5 weeks Detention or 1 week supension -illegal activity - expellsion &be arrested by police Etc. Patrol force: ( there is 1-10 squads) -menma kirishima- (age: idk yet) he's a delinquent who spent over 10 hrs in detention. He can see future events. He is assigned in to squad 10. -Maria Suimyaku- she been on the patrol force since elementary school. Her parents are cops. She the leader of squad 10. She can detect when someone is lying &read minds -ikki Moriyama- he's in squad 10. He can see through other peoples eyes. His moms is a dective &his dad is in the army. -senji Kishisaki- he act as the patrols mission control. He has aspergers. He making gadgets &devices for each squad. Rivals: -candy dealers:deal candy like drugs -milk counterfeiters-put pop in milk cartons then sell it. -repeat offenders -taggers-wrote in sharpie pen -people who commit crimes as awhole Any suggestion for the plot, characters, setting or either wise will be appreciated.