He brings his attention onto Parker as he gazes down at him with the deepest sympathy one could ever give. "How are you holding up, kiddo?" His voice barelly holds back the emotion his eyes already show. He kneels down in front of him and speaks in a soft, spoken tone; too low for anyone else to hear. Unsure about the first sentence "gazes down at him with the deepest sympathy one could ever give." Perhaps something around the lines of: "He focuses his attention onto Parker as he gives a rich, empathetic smile. Help!
He focuses his attention towards Parker, gazing down at him with the deepest sympathy one could ever give. "How are you holding up, kiddo?" His voice threatens to reveal the emotion that his eyes already show. He kneels down in front of him and speaks in a soft-spoken tone; much too low for anyone else to hear. just a suggestion. i love editing.